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We took no notice of a sky turning gray Upon the ever changing, brooding afternoon The rain at last, that finally tiptoed in We almost missed the laughter, but for leaves That murmured quick surprise along the eaves And tapped with chatter on the window-pane But having heard, we left our cozy place And stepped outside into the evening air To feel the slope of rain upon our faces And could even hear the rustling trees Pitter patter, dripping laughter With song of raindrops in the night ~ prelude to bedtime rain comes as a child behind leaden eyes and indignation sky puckers up with an angry brow and brooding face sputtering with warm tears- howling pleas day weeps til’ night sleeps ~ Do not cry or lament the rain Just look for where the rainbow begins ~ a sobering sky spills a tear upon the dust... earth's quivering chin ~ Free Verse/Nonet/Crystalline/Haiku

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 4/12/2011 6:16:00 AM
Many warmest congrats Carrie for this superb write.
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Date: 4/12/2011 5:39:00 AM
Congrats on winning the contest. A wonderful piece!
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Date: 4/12/2011 5:09:00 AM
Congratulations on your win Carrie in Nikko's "Anagram" contest. Love, Carol
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Date: 4/11/2011 8:32:00 PM
Great win Carrie with such a wonderful entry!! Congratulations. Brian
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Date: 4/11/2011 3:12:00 PM
CArrie, this is a lovely win, dear. What a cool angagram,a crier, to relate to rain!!
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Date: 4/11/2011 3:06:00 PM
As I said when I first read this poem, it's "extraordinary"! Congratulations on taking the top spot, Carrie. So happy for you. Love, Carolyn
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Date: 4/11/2011 2:13:00 PM
Congratulations on your win in this great contest..Sara
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Date: 4/11/2011 1:30:00 PM
Congrats Carrie on your super first place win in Nikko's great contest with this exceptional entry .. so special .. enjoy your top spot with luv..
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Date: 4/11/2011 1:01:00 PM
Sorry it's meant to say congrats on winning xxx
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Date: 4/11/2011 1:00:00 PM
Contests on winning :o)
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Date: 4/11/2011 12:43:00 PM
Yikers my brain cells are fried! Congrad's on your win! Light & Love
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Date: 4/11/2011 11:46:00 AM
Very rich imagery. Refreshing and fitting for the season. Congratulations!
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Date: 4/11/2011 10:57:00 AM
Super duper congrats to you Carrie :D!! I was just wowed and moved by this and of how you used another write (a challenging one too) as an inspiration was just awesome -- you've used your anagram so well in your write-- hugs, thank you for this amazing entry :) honestly loved each form that you used here :)
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Date: 4/11/2011 10:49:00 AM
Congratulations on the first place win in the contest, carrie
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Date: 3/16/2011 1:02:00 PM
Excellent Imagery here Carrie!Liked it very much.Goodluck in the contest---kashinath
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Date: 3/15/2011 2:38:00 PM
Extraordinary images from an amazing writer! I like the message too, Carrie. Let's try not to cry when things look gloomy -- instead we should be seeking out the rainbows. Terrific entry for Nikko's contest. I love the anagram of your name that you chose. Best wishes for success! Love, Carolyn
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