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Rain

I hear the tapping of the rain Empty feelings of regret and pain The sky is stained with gray My mind forms words I cannot say Sadness creeping, I think of you But you’re still lost, and I am too Both wandering a land so dead All the things we could’ve said Words that were more than just for show I’m falling, falling far below The rain is steady, like the beat of a heart I know there’s no such thing as a new start The clouds are gray, forever gray My mind is full, full with words I cannot say

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Date: 9/27/2016 2:25:00 AM
That's the way to go! Congrats on your first entry and welcome to Poetry Soup, Patrick. :)
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Date: 9/26/2016 2:38:00 PM
Patrick, Welcome to Poetry Soup. It will be a delight to read and become familiar with your poems in the future. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile others passed when I first joined the soup. Wishing you and your poetry the best. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here STARTING with me- SKAT :) Drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs **YNR - SKAT
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Date: 9/25/2016 5:39:00 PM
Patrick, Welcome to Poetry soup, I hope you enjoy the community. Here, you will find friendly poets who enjoy supporting one another. I myself, enjoy reading and commenting those who want to be read. The only time I give constructive criticism is when a poet desires it. However, if for some reason the poem is not my field I will guide you to someone who is more qualified than I. Stop by and read one of my poems if you like. My poems are not perfect, but I have a feeling you might like one. I encourage you to check out the contest page and read to receive comments. Tell me a little about your poetic skills if you like. It will be my pleasure to follow and read every poem you post from here on :) We are Lucky To Have you. Your New Poet Friend @-> LINDA <-@
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