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Rain

The petrichor of the first rain on the field Gets into my nostrils It is a freedom from the cage of scorching heat In my exhausted lungs Into the uncaged shower of moistened fragrance From the dank dry grass My tongue seeks to get a salty taste of the ocean Inhaling the wet mass Of the stones on roadsides emanating petrichor The scent of rain once more I understand jasmine will be at my drenched door The exit of dead dance Drizzly entrance of your rain-kissed glance _______________________________________ June 6, 2016

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Date: 6/13/2016 3:43:00 PM
This is very lovely Probir. I love the scent of rain, especially after the lawn has been mowed. ; )
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Probir Gupta
Date: 6/13/2016 9:58:00 PM
Exactly.... Thank you....
Date: 6/11/2016 11:03:00 PM
Wonderful, creative use of words to project intriguing images about humankind's relationship with nature. In a word, excellent.
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Probir Gupta
Date: 6/11/2016 11:49:00 PM
Thank you for the analytic appreciation....
Date: 6/9/2016 7:22:00 AM
Very deep insight to the (breath-taking) inter-relationship of humankind and rain/water, Probir. Great write! David
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Probir Gupta
Date: 6/11/2016 11:47:00 PM
Thank you...
Date: 6/7/2016 12:18:00 PM
Thank you....
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Date: 6/7/2016 11:48:00 AM
Lovely....must be a winner,,,good luck
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Probir Gupta
Date: 6/7/2016 12:22:00 PM
Thank you....
Date: 6/6/2016 1:02:00 PM
what a beauty and an outpour of delightful images!... greeat stuff, probir!..huggs
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Probir Gupta
Date: 6/6/2016 7:18:00 PM
Thank you nette ...
Date: 6/6/2016 6:47:00 AM
May your words continue to rain on down on us Probir :-) Good luck in the contest:-) hugs jan xx
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Probir Gupta
Date: 6/6/2016 10:53:00 AM
Thank you Jan...

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