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My first drop will come in a sudden knocking on your window pane for I feel you in my heart crying and calling out his name with misty eyes if you’ll glance at me once in a while and curl up yourself back to bed with your louder cries I’ll hurl myself by the wind against your sill strum strings of sweet songs to sense what has gone amiss melodiously drops… then s s t d t d o r 0 r P o p o , p p . . . Just out there and at your somber roof again, I drop knock drop knock drop pause a while hoping waiting… If you will finally step into our glassy rendezvous my scented charm wafts around redolence of my balmy petrichor embraces you heals the wounds and mends your broken heart Let me cry with you, wash all your tears away till my cool breeze drains them up May I be one of the stewards to continuously nurture you and this earth by pouring down God’s loving graces and divine love. June 5, 2016 10.35pm Words per line:13,11,9,7,5,3,1 Just a try of the contest First rain of June poured down around 5pm this afternoon and lasted only 30 minutes. So it’s still humid today in my place.

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Date: 8/27/2016 10:25:00 PM
Love it,,, haven't posted any lately. Though I 100 others you might try :)
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Len Gasun
Date: 9/24/2016 11:38:00 AM
Hello my dear friend, Debbie and Libra mate! I'm so sorry if my reply comes so late because I was so busy and up to this moment, I'm still busy with some missions in life esp. with my family. But, I want to thank you so much belatedly for your wonderful visit. Like you, I havent' been writing lately but now, Im having a short break and I'm trying to write even a short one. Thank you for reminding me. I'll visit you tom/soon. ok. TYTYSM. Blessings and Many Hugs to you from me!
Date: 8/2/2016 3:42:00 AM
I like this poem very much. Such a proximity of rain and the rained upon. I like the somber roof and glassy rendesvouz. Well done.
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Len Gasun
Date: 9/24/2016 11:21:00 AM
Super belated thanks for sharing generously your time to read one of my humble works sir. So much appreciated. Pls. forgive me for the late expression of gratitude coz I think I've overlooked your comment on my past poems. Again, thank you so much and more blessings! Hugs.
Date: 6/6/2016 10:28:00 AM
A beautiful poem to look at, and lovely poem to read. Love it.
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Len Gasun
Date: 6/7/2016 9:37:00 AM
Thank you so much my dear friend. Hugs!
Date: 6/5/2016 8:00:00 PM
very creative! Its pouring rain here! Hope it stops soon! :)
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Len Gasun
Date: 6/7/2016 9:37:00 AM
Thank you so much my dear friend. Hugs!
Date: 6/5/2016 12:20:00 PM
A lovely poem Leonora...i do love the smell of a refreshing rain.
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Len Gasun
Date: 6/7/2016 9:34:00 AM
Thank you so much my dear friend, Tim. Hugs and have a great week!

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