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I wish she was a human She is like an angel With a magic wand and pure white feathery wings Visits me when I am lost When I don’t care to cherish the memories, the most. With a bag full of gifts, she comes Leaving behind some forgotten melodies, she leaves. Sometimes it’s a melancholy Other times it can be a yearning To dig the past, most of the times All total, I am in bliss, in her presence. She embraces me close to her chest Like a mom, lest I run away. She cradles me in her lap For that’s the best I can hope To conjure up the past To hum the forgotten melodies.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015




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Date: 2/3/2016 4:28:00 AM
- This is so beautiful Remnants of Some Silly Experiences, I love poem about angels .... even in rain :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Punnia Viswan Bhatia
Date: 2/3/2016 10:36:00 AM
You are wonderful angel...love and peace..thank you :))
Date: 12/28/2015 8:31:00 PM
this piece is so sweet
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Punnia Viswan Bhatia
Date: 12/28/2015 8:50:00 PM
thank you my sweet friend :)) God bless
Date: 12/21/2015 9:20:00 PM
What I love about this free verse is the line "when I dont care to cherish the memories" That is an amazing line.. many people love to write about the past, wail about the past, regret the past, be nostalgic about the past and we poets are known for reminiscing the past--but I love that forgetting is embraced and the Nature rain specifically brings deliverance. Cheers to you.
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Punnia Viswan Bhatia
Date: 12/22/2015 12:47:00 AM
Thank you Toni for this wonderful comment..highly appreciated..wishing you a very happy christmas..love and peace to you my friend..:))
Date: 11/19/2015 11:29:00 AM
Your write is so delicately sad...:), jill
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Punnia Viswan Bhatia
Date: 11/19/2015 11:34:00 AM
Sing along..the forgotten melodies..let us share some sweet hymns..Thank you jill for your time..love and peace..

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