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Here the pitter patter of the rain going down the drain making me want to go to sleep

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014




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Date: 2/6/2014 8:35:00 AM
Michael what a cute and creative write. But it would make me want to "tinkle" instead of sleep. LOL Thanks for the great comment on my Picnic Pleasures poem.
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Date: 1/9/2014 2:42:00 PM
- Yes, do as the bear .... came forward to spring ... - Nice haiku, Michael!! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 1/9/2014 3:44:00 PM
Thanks Anne for your comments glad you liked it xoxo

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