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Rain

desirable rain giver and taker of life ... refreshes your soul

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013




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Date: 5/27/2013 5:33:00 AM
I like how you took parts of your previous poem and created a Haiku from it...I must admit that you took the best parts of your previous poem to make this awesome write! You have crafted a tremendous piece, what a delightful poem here Seren my friend, Great Work!!
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Seren Roberts
Date: 5/27/2013 11:20:00 AM
thanks Russell, i am not good at Haiku but I persevere.....Seren

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