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Rain, wet, cold, tiny little molecules, almost shaped like tagpoles, clear, yet shades of blue, pelting down as if almost new, breathtaking from the grey smoking chimney view, roaring winds sweep through the rear choking smog, enchanting, yet behold misery, frustration, panic, eagerness run through, back away, back away, from your rear window in situ.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 9/17/2012 11:51:00 AM
Wonderful picutre of a rainy day - enjoyed this very much.
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Amanda Sullivan
Date: 9/17/2012 12:32:00 PM
Hi Ann, thank you for your kind comment, I really am glad you enjoyed it xx <3
Date: 4/23/2012 4:59:00 AM
A warm welcome to PoetrySoup I offer to you Amanda. I wish for you the best in your writing endeavors whatever they may be. May you find inspiration by reading some of the poetry written here by other poets. May the sun shine on you that you might find great joy in your life. Love, Carol
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Amanda Sullivan
Date: 10/23/2012 9:58:00 AM
Ty xx
Date: 4/22/2012 8:18:00 PM
I like the imagery here! Well done!
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Amanda Sullivan
Date: 10/23/2012 9:59:00 AM
Ty xx
Date: 4/22/2012 1:33:00 PM
nice piece
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Amanda Sullivan
Date: 10/23/2012 9:59:00 AM
Ty xx
Date: 4/22/2012 12:37:00 PM
Alot of rain.....after rain comes the sun ! Well written Amanda, thank you. - oxox love Anne-Lise
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Amanda Sullivan
Date: 10/23/2012 9:59:00 AM
Ty xx
Date: 4/22/2012 12:23:00 PM
That's really nice. Puts me in mind of the chimney sweep scene from Mary Poppins!
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Amanda Sullivan
Date: 10/23/2012 9:59:00 AM
Aww Ty Shelley xx :)

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