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i. you drew clouds under my feet to break my fall only light this side of creation salmon skies embraced your tenderness ii. I heard your heart calling only love will show the way let us reconcile this passion before it turns to rain and earth swallows our tears goodbye goodbye we meet again.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 6/24/2011 10:09:00 AM
Nice passionate expressions, Anna
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Date: 6/24/2011 8:12:00 AM
Smile ~ “Makes Myself Think of An Old Song By Peter Gabriel ~ Something About `Loves Rain, Pouring Down Upon Me`.... ~ Nice Poe Anna & Loved The Image of `The Salmon Skies ~ Love, Always,`” John!:) ~
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Date: 6/24/2011 5:48:00 AM
I like the way this poem carries a sad yet sweet message
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