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RAIN written by me at 8 years old around 1945. Printed in Philadelphia Evening Bulletin To me rain, Is a pitter patter on the window pain. "But to me" One man said, "It means a nasty cold in the head." (I guess I just was born a bad poet with a attitude.) By Miriam McCue writer of bad and even worse poetry.

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Date: 3/24/2010 9:12:00 PM
Miriam, Congratulations on your worthy poem feature this week. Agape, Moses
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Date: 3/23/2010 4:09:00 AM
LOL Great truth and wonderful humor...from a born poet...a good one. Congratulations Miriam, on your poetry feature this week. Smiles, Dane Ann
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Date: 3/22/2010 3:05:00 PM
"Born a bad poet?" I guess not. Your rain poem is how all good poets start out - just a few meaningful lines. Of course, if you want to write bad poetry, that's easy to do, but that 8 year old sounds to me like a good poet in the making. Love, daver
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Date: 3/22/2010 1:25:00 PM
heehee bet you didn't know when you wrote this ar 8 yrs of age that it would be a featured poem on a poetry site when you got to be a big girl. Took you a while but you got her done! ; )
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Date: 3/22/2010 1:19:00 PM
Hey Miriam! Cool eh? Congrats on your poem featured here , Lady Miriam! enjoy this honor in the land of fruits and nuts. Zit rainin' there?-Robert
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Date: 3/22/2010 5:48:00 AM
Congratulations on your poetry being featured this week Miriam. Love, Carol
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Date: 3/22/2010 5:06:00 AM
Congrats on the featured poem---well done!!
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Date: 1/1/2010 9:52:00 AM
a poet writer with an attitude even at 8 yrs old! cool. Prophetic. ya still got it girl! :)-Robert
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Date: 12/31/2009 3:30:00 AM
Hang on to the attitude...Poets are born with it...I liked this piece..And I have a cold as well...Happy New Year and God Bless...Taz
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Date: 12/30/2009 9:55:00 AM
Really cute! andrea
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Date: 12/30/2009 9:48:00 AM
Everyone has their opinion. Keep the creative pen flowing. Sara
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