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Raging Storm

It rumbles as the storm begins 
Frustration strikes all with in
Raging wars on peaceful land
In the end there is no lending hand
For bonds are ripped and torn
The mender is completely worn
Sick from furious waves 
Full of overwhelming craze
The sea itself has been iced over
As unrealistic hopes dreadfully lower
The calm is so far into the distant
Its meaning becomes nonexistent
Misinterpreted loved ones 
Are mistaken as the burden
The obscure truth is masked in doubt
Heavily hanging in the air  
Such animosity, not a soul should ever bear

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  1. Date: 11/2/2012 12:33:00 AM
    Really like your imagery here, of course i like storms, anyway very nice read, blessings, Carl

    Dodd Avatar Lacy Dodd
    Date: 1/17/2013 7:53:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you! I love storms too, but not the type of family feuds
  1. Date: 11/1/2012 8:15:00 PM
    hoping that its over

  1. Date: 11/1/2012 3:04:00 PM
    Lacy, wow... I'm glad this storm is not in my area... nice imagery very epic.....always~pd

    Dodd Avatar Lacy Dodd
    Date: 1/17/2013 7:52:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    thanks! I wrote this poem because of a family feud. I really like how poems can have many meanings from one person to the next and how current events can make you see a poem as it was written for it. I wonder if I hadn't posted it right around the time of the storm if it would have had a different meaning to people. :) Anyway just food for thought! Thank you for the compliment!
    Courtney Avatar Courtney Courtney
    Date: 11/1/2012 8:15:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    I have been out there on the island when it hits it's awfull