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RAGING STORM

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RAGING STORM

While 
storms 
are 
raging
people 
are 
praying
please 
God 
teach 
us 
to 
fly
so 
that 
we 
can 
stay 
dry
the 
terrible 
fears
the 
floods 
of 
tears

Everybody's 
rushing
as 
they 
hear 
the 
waters 
gushing
it's 
getting 
dark 
and 
cold
there 
is 
nowhere 
to 
hold
as 
the 
waters 
rise
we're 
in 
for 
a 
surprise 

The 
streets 
are 
disappearing
it's 
a 
hurricane
that 
is 
what 
they're 
fearing
people 
are 
in 
pain
as 
the 
trees 
are 
falling
cars 
are 
crawling

Children 
are 
screaming
adults 
are 
scheming
there 
must 
be 
a 
way 
out
the 
rumbling 
thunder 
is 
loud
houses 
are 
crashing
Mother 
Nature 
and 
Earth 
are 
clashing

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  1. Date: 7/4/2011 8:36:00 PM
    Sawbona Sybil. Very intense and fearful experience you have captured. More please

  1. Date: 6/27/2011 4:55:00 AM
    A warm welcome to PoetrySoup I offer to you Sybil. I wish for you the best in your writing endeavors whatever they may be. May you find inspiration by reading some of the poetry written here by other poets. Read and comment on their's and they will return in kind. May the sun shine on you that you might find great joy in your life. Love and blessing always, Carol

  1. Date: 6/24/2011 9:11:00 AM
    Welcome to Poetry Soup.. so enjoyed reading your creative poetry .. enjoy the site as u continue to share words with luv..

  1. Date: 6/24/2011 8:24:00 AM
    Double 7 plus to you, Sybil. I love the raw emotion in here. An entertaining piece, for sure. ^__^