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Radiant Fourth of July

multicolored sparks dwindling across the unfilled sky... bright smoke you ignite ©RashanaKing2010

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Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 7/6/2010 8:25:00 AM

Congratulations Rashana on your win in Deborah Guzzi's contest "Fireworks". Love, Carol

Kabuteng P.Ink K.

Date: 7/6/2010 1:26:00 AM

congrats Rashana with your win with this radiant haiku :) --nikko :)

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 7/5/2010 1:37:00 PM

Congratulations, Rashana!

Elaine George

Date: 7/5/2010 8:57:00 AM

ovely Haiky, Rashana. congratulations on your win. Lainie

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 7/4/2010 6:34:00 PM

Congrats Rashana on your winning Haiku in the Fireworks contest with this wonderful write and win.. enjoy as u celebrate the 4th in style.. with luv from the "Sweetheart" in Hawaii.. AlohA...

Date: 7/4/2010 4:24:00 PM

Nice use of imagery for an interesting perspecitve. Congratulations on your win in Deborah's contest. Enjoy your honor. I wish you many more. Karen

Diiamond Rich

Date: 7/4/2010 1:32:00 PM

Enjoyed reading your poetry today.. I'm new to the soup so I hope you have an open mind as far as poetry. Enjoy ya day.

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 7/3/2010 7:02:00 PM

A wonderful entry to the contest. Good luck

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 7/3/2010 6:04:00 PM

lovely description on a beautiful display,, enjoyed...P.D.

Sara Kendrick

Date: 7/3/2010 4:50:00 PM

Interesting fireworks write..Sara