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Anger is rarely locked inside me. It gurgles from me like a stream, not breaking like waves on shores. But if I stay silent, wearing displeasure on my face, an ocean roars inside me. “When I am silent, I have thunder hidden inside” - Rumi Written 12/1/2015 for the Contest of Silent One

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Date: 12/12/2015 2:43:00 PM
That sounds like me for sure. I rarely get angry but can wear displeasure or disappointment on my face. Awesome. love phyl
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Date: 12/6/2015 9:22:00 AM
Well expressed, congrats!
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Date: 12/5/2015 10:32:00 AM
Yes. Best to let it out. Love, daver
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Date: 12/4/2015 11:49:00 AM
WOW, such awareness!! Congratulations Andrea!!
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Date: 12/4/2015 10:28:00 AM
Anger gurgling like a stream- a superbly controlled emotion! Congrats on your placement!
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Date: 12/4/2015 6:55:00 AM
Congratulations on the placement of the contest Andrea.
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Date: 12/4/2015 1:06:00 AM
Congrats Andrea to win. Same quote is chosen by me. Anisha D
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Date: 12/4/2015 12:07:00 AM
I have that kind of personality too Andrea. When I am very angry I am very silent. I liked your entry and I love Rumi. I really wanted to write one for this contest but ended up keeping Carissa over night and it closed before I could write one. Congratulations on your top win!
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Date: 12/3/2015 11:19:00 PM
Ocean roars wow very nice, congrats on your win.
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Date: 12/3/2015 11:06:00 PM
Very wonderful expression.. roaring angst.. congrats on ur win!
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Date: 12/3/2015 8:30:00 PM
An Ocean roars inside me. Wow, powerful Andrea. Nice win!
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Date: 12/3/2015 5:56:00 PM
Dropping back with my congrats Andrea:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 12/3/2015 5:20:00 PM
WOW, Andrea, Congratulations on your Quoting Rumi Win. SKAT ** Love
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Date: 12/3/2015 4:55:00 PM
Good work using the quote..Reads like a winner to me..Way to go..The nonet is a good form for carrying the idea..Thanks for stopping by..China will have to put in environmental safeguards which is going to drive the price of goods up..We here need to start up manufacturing again so that we will be able to be self supporting again..Sara
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Date: 12/3/2015 10:30:00 AM
I keep that in mind if I ever have the pleasure of meeting you face to face. Well written Nonet.
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Date: 12/3/2015 9:42:00 AM
Excellent as always! A Fav!
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Date: 12/2/2015 11:25:00 PM
G'day Andrea... still waters run deep. You presented this poem nicely Andrea, and the topic is certainly relevant for many of us - Lindsay
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Date: 12/2/2015 7:56:00 PM
....hate to be there when that tide comes in...This is really a great write Andrea, builds just like the waves. Methinks it will do well,.
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Date: 12/2/2015 4:53:00 PM
Very good Andrea...
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Date: 12/2/2015 4:45:00 PM
Andrea, this is good. I enjoyed your take on the theme. You should place well with this write. Good luck in the contest:-) Alexis
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Date: 12/2/2015 4:32:00 PM
I loved this Andrea..Guess Silent One will too , dear lady.,
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Date: 12/2/2015 4:24:00 PM
I chose an etheree for mine Andrea love the creative form. Love your take on the quote - good luck in the contest:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 12/2/2015 4:20:00 PM
Nicely done, Andrea. Powerful words that image anger well. All the best for the contest. Hugs, Sandra
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