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Quiet Footsteps

A velveteen hue paints the long hall, a subtle glance from the morning sun awakening along with quiet footsteps Drapes try to darken a lost night where two winks were only a dream and the day refused to remain at bay Hush and fly away my beautiful songbird for the tune you play cannot be heard fly away my bird and let the restless be Come back when a new day breaks when pumpkin spice fills the horizon and I'll let you climb again into my heart

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016




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Date: 10/27/2016 4:06:00 AM
Filled with nostalgia your poem drips with the quiet footsteps of those whose heart you touched. Congrats on your placement.
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Date: 10/26/2016 6:17:00 PM
Impressive Tim and congrats!
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Date: 10/26/2016 1:50:00 PM
Very beautiful, Tim. Many congrats on your win. Elaine
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Date: 10/26/2016 1:46:00 PM
Lovely and deeply, sadly moving - so perfect, Tim. AND, ya know what? It is pumpkin season so, please tell your heart! Shouldn't you have a gold thingy with the pretty star? congratulations on 2nd place - really, I thought 1-3 got gold!??? CayCay
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Date: 10/26/2016 1:45:00 PM
Congrats Tim, for your well, deserved top placement in the contest!! ;-)
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Date: 10/26/2016 12:45:00 PM
Lovely poem, beautifully written. Congratulations on the win, Tim! ...Fran
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Date: 10/22/2016 4:29:00 PM
Tim, this is dreamy and lovely,;beautifully penned
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Date: 10/21/2016 2:08:00 PM
Beautiful and creative imagery, Tim! Love, Kim
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Date: 10/21/2016 11:55:00 AM
This sounds sad to me, like an insomniac, the nights were made from dreaming and refusal wake from the unrested. A push away begs the day not to come. -I have probably misinterpreted it, but that is the interesting part of writing and reading eh... hugs
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Date: 10/21/2016 11:51:00 AM
tim, another read that simply charms me... greeat job!..huggs
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Date: 10/21/2016 11:07:00 AM
That is very nice. Great ending! :)
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Tim Smith
Date: 10/21/2016 11:11:00 AM
Thank you Heidi
Date: 10/21/2016 10:46:00 AM
When pumpkin spice fills the horizon and i ll let you climb again into my heart-Now thats exceptional..Beautiful poem.
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Tim Smith
Date: 10/21/2016 11:11:00 AM
Thank you Charma. Hope to be doing some pumpkin carving this weekend : )

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