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Quiet Beauty

The sun is shining brightly now The clouds from the hurricane gone Air is crisp, cool slightly moving From the northwest where winter comes One lone hugh hickory decorates The wood below the house with gold The water droplets on the grass Glistens in the soft yellow sun The crows and roosters seem to be In a choral competition For on stage spotlight in woods where Burnt sienna contrasts pine green The needles still linger on trees Ginko still is green waiting change To the yellow of fall which means Winter is upon the whole land The sasanqa camelia blooms Double white blooms first profussion In seven years, early freeze kills Most years, blessed with quiet beauty

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 11/17/2009 8:16:00 PM
beautiful Sara..JB
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Date: 11/16/2009 11:43:00 AM
Great descrition it paints such a beautiful picture in the readers mind and thats what great writting does great job
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Date: 11/14/2009 12:09:00 PM
enjoyable
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Date: 11/13/2009 12:32:00 PM
I am so happy that your excellent poetry was included in my day of enjoyable reading. May you have a wonderful weekend filled with love, fun, and loads of inspiration Sara. Love, Carol
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Date: 11/13/2009 5:46:00 AM
Sara, I really enjoyed this poem... rooster's crow... Burnt sienna and pine green ... (are you a painter??? Sorry, can't remember.) Ginko still green... (Ginko male? Or female?Do you harvest home grown herbs?) the poem flows well, captivates, keeps the reader interested. It's very good. Love to you. Dane Ann
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Date: 11/13/2009 12:03:00 AM
Like the inner poem of verse 2 Sara,& thank you for your welcome comments today.rgds Brian
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Date: 11/12/2009 10:40:00 PM
Very Lovely Poem ... Flowing in each verse, Words Painting a Motion Picture ... Excellent Write ... This One, Going into My Fav's ... MoonBee
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Date: 11/12/2009 6:36:00 PM
Such wonderful descriptions....very nice...enjoyed...Marty
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Date: 11/12/2009 5:54:00 PM
Yes beautiful and a lovely visual you paint with words. Keep writing! Smile...Love Light Patty
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Date: 11/12/2009 4:44:00 PM
beautiful poem mom!!
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Date: 11/12/2009 4:44:00 PM
A lovely poem Sara. A peaceful place you seem to describe, with the crows and roosters in choral Competition. Sincerely, Love, Moses
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Date: 11/12/2009 3:24:00 PM
This one is up there with your other finer pieces Sara, i liked this one >> James
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