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WE ALL WALK AMONGST GOD'S BEAM OF LIGHT SHINING DOWN UPON US, YET ALL WE ARE DESTINED TO SEE IS THE DARKNESS AND HATRED LAYED TO WASTE AROUND US... IF DEATH IS OUR ULTIMATE DEFEAT... IF LOVE IS OUR ULTIMATE VICTORY... WHAT IS OUR ULTIMATE SACRIFICE? WHO IS THE CONDEMNED? IS IT THE ONE'S WHO LIVE WITHOUT LOVE? OR THE ONE'S THAT LIVE WITH HATE? WHO IS THERE TO DISTINGUISH BETWEEN LOVE AND HATE? BETWEEN LIFE AND DEATH? WHO GOOD SIR? IS IT OUR OWN CHOICE? IS IT’S GOD’S DESIGN? I SAY IT IS NEITHER, THERE IS a PATH THAT WE FOLLOW BUT WE DO NOT CHOOSE IT OUR SELVES, I SAY IT IS FATE THAT LEADS OUR LIVES AND NOT GOD, I SAY OUR FUTURE IS UNDECIDED YOU SAY IT IS PLANNED, BUT NO MATTER WHAT HAPPENS NOTHING CAN KEEP ME AWAY FROM YOU, HATE NOR DEATH AS LONG AS MY LOVE FOR YOU IS STRONG MY LIFE IS ALWAYS WORTH LIVING, AS THERE IS NO STRONGER MOTIVE THAN LOVE IT SELF.

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Date: 5/21/2011 3:33:00 AM
Love is a powerful emotion, and ultimately stronger than hate, I believe. We should all strive to follow the path of love, rather than hate--not always easy to do though. Interesting write, but I do believe that we all have real choices to make in our lives.
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Date: 8/24/2010 9:32:00 AM
Thank you. This was the first poem i had wrote.
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Date: 8/22/2010 6:31:00 AM
Well said my friend...Love is strong...Michael
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