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Is My Poems Even Good... Feel Like It's not Good At All My Life Sucked In Being Creative So Please Tell Me What You Like; I Don't Get Many Reads Nor Likes My Feelings Are Thinking On Everything Poems Are All I Have But I Feel Weak That maybe I Shouldn't Write My Heart Hurts From All The Pain, That's Shoots Up Through My Vains I Can't Take My No More , About To Scream .... If No Answer Shows, When Looking At These Ugly Walls that I see On How I Wish I can Break Them, For More Better Thoughts Emotion After Another I Know I Need To Stop Worrying On What others Think, But Damn That Thought Of Knowing What Others Are Feeling Make me Wonder. ..... So As I Write Another Story Told. Thanks For These Reads, It's Time To Pray For Good Thoughts And not Giving Up On My Poems And Giving Me Good Shows for Comments

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Date: 3/29/2016 4:20:00 PM
Be kind to your muse, as we at ps will be kind to you.
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Date: 3/23/2016 5:54:00 AM
Kind of how I feel when I feel spacey and blank good work
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Ashley Evans
Date: 3/24/2016 2:24:00 PM
THANK U!!

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