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The darkness was prominent
Hope only peeked in and out
The synapses were not responding
My mind was in a drought
Then the rains came
The land was quenched
And brought hope about

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  1. Date: 10/7/2009 9:17:00 PM
    Lets hope for more hope:)the rains came,theland was quenched..excellent--Charma

  1. Date: 10/7/2009 5:09:00 AM
    Nicely done metaphoric rhyme. Keep writing. Sara