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Quelled: End of the Road

Thy gaze; like those Persian spears full in flight, Thrust 'n us to see the tales in those brown eyes - Shimmers, like powdered silver beneath sunlight Are the paragraphs and verses of her life. Joyous to behold, yet more than I can praise, Alike a constellation within one’s face. Did part of the universe fall down to earth? To wield breath as whom I behold in your-self? Or are you instead our Creator’s template - That left the heavens and on earth found a place? The seeming absence of everyone so, In every moment that your eyes to me would throw - Those Persian spears great in their flight and craft To stir this bloke who like so had loved a lass. Like so had loved, like so started with a craze, Alas, from whence died down after each day, Until all that lay left was me in fetters Soul and body, so was scourged who let her. I would pretermit this ardour at all costs For my mind (impaired) had offered but one choice. You’re beautiful still, still more than I can praise But ‘bout your fervour, please look another way.

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Date: 4/13/2022 10:35:00 AM
I enjoyed reading this lovely romantic verse. Sara
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Date: 1/6/2017 6:59:00 PM
some beautiful lines in this poem, Dominic. The challenge is so inspiring. I sure hope my muse will do one for ME!
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Dominic Amezimi
Date: 4/1/2017 7:13:00 AM
Thanks a million Andrea, you're always welcome here. Thanks for stopping by.
Date: 1/5/2017 4:56:00 PM
Excellently written beautiful poem. The form and flow fit perfectly with the content of the poem. Absolutely wonderful.
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Dominic Amezimi
Date: 1/6/2017 2:56:00 PM
I am humbled by your warm words, thank you Christy Stover, love, Dominic.

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