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Putting On the Ritz

Putting on the Ritz Those weird faces below glamorous make up, The enormous laughs under those debts, Show off to whom lesser privileged than you? As those affluents will never look at you ! Luxury of the motels and wine in pubs, Those night lusts and hefty gifts, Moving in bigger cars owning king sized houses, Best of attire embellished in sapphire, False faces of ritz truth dumped deep within. Whence our kids crave for foods, And poor naked in streets are covered only in mist, Longing for a meal as hunger eats mankind. Why can't we be modest to accept in dignity, When at the lounge we stand, Counting our guests wishing there was a miss, Showing liberty at heart that weeps on money shed, Hard earnings wasted on an imitation game, Pocketed inside out ersatz, Putting on the Ritz ! © Dr. Upma A. Sharma Written Sept 8th, 2015 For contest by Judy Konos Awarded 1st place win

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Date: 9/13/2015 8:47:00 AM
Uma, you've hit the nail on the head! An urgent need for modesty. Congrats for your win!
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Date: 9/12/2015 3:16:00 PM
Excellent take on this topic, Upma. Can feel the contrast between those who can afford to put on a show and those in need. Congrats on a worthy win. // paul
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Date: 9/11/2015 6:18:00 PM
Congratulations Dr. Sharma on your win with this well thought out entry. Thank you for your kind comments on my offerings. Love, Joyce
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Date: 9/10/2015 4:20:00 PM
lovely taken on the theme many congrats Dr Sharma:-) hugs jan xx
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Dr. Upma A. Sharma
Date: 9/10/2015 11:14:00 PM
Thanks Jan! Appreciate your kind visits to my page, wonder how you never miss out !
Date: 9/10/2015 3:07:00 PM
Congrats on a great win Dr Upma
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Date: 9/10/2015 11:13:00 PM
Thanks Joseph! Appreciate your constant support!
Date: 9/10/2015 1:22:00 PM
Dr Upma, Congrats on your "Puttin On The Ritz WIN.." SKAT
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Date: 9/10/2015 11:12:00 PM
Thanks Skat! Always appreciate your kind visits that I look forward to!
Date: 9/10/2015 12:49:00 PM
Wonderfully written...Congrats on the win!
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Date: 9/10/2015 11:12:00 PM
Thanks Dan!
Date: 9/10/2015 12:14:00 PM
Well done for your take on the theme and for your win, Upma! Julia, with my best wishes.
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Dr. Upma A. Sharma
Date: 9/10/2015 11:11:00 PM
Thanks Julia! Appreciate your kind visits always!
Date: 9/10/2015 10:51:00 AM
Thank you for being in my contest
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Dr. Upma A. Sharma
Date: 9/10/2015 11:11:00 PM
Thanks Judy! Glad you liked this one!
Date: 9/8/2015 4:38:00 PM
Hi Dr. Upma: You created such a spin on the life that some people take for granted. My compliments.
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Date: 9/10/2015 11:04:00 PM
Thanks Ralph! Appreciate your kind visit!
Date: 9/8/2015 8:48:00 AM
Your writing is wonderful Dr Upma. Greed and glamour corrupts the soul. Narcissisim runs rampant with these fools. In the end there is retribution. Humanity is flawed and it is so sad. Love your truths.
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Dr. Upma A. Sharma
Date: 9/8/2015 8:51:00 AM
Thnx Michael! Appreciate your visit, so glad u liked!
Date: 9/8/2015 5:14:00 AM
Rich and vain people should not provoke the poor. A wonderfully constructed poem with a clear message. Good luck in the contest, Dr. Upma. A seven!
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Dr. Upma A. Sharma
Date: 9/8/2015 5:16:00 AM
Thnx dear Demetrios! Appreciate ur kind visit and words!

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