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purple gold

purple gold payday on Friday migrants’ plainsong a wealth of clusters ripe from the sun's strength purple gold

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013


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Roberthenry Poulin
Date: 8/19/2013 5:23:00 AM
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The haiku, you know it with the juxtaposition on the end with PURPLE GOLD of a grape, could even be raisen LOL. The reader will decide what you already know. It is a good haiku. I've had over a thousand published so I know a good haiku when I read one and yours is very well crafted. Also, in the genre the first line of a haiku/senryu/ or tanka is always the title of the poem. Robert Henry Poulin
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Poet Destroyer A
Date: 7/6/2013 11:10:00 PM
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a wonderful haiku * thank you for sharing. Linda
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Reason A. Poteet
Date: 7/13/2020 9:15:00 PM
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Thanks, Linda. Just posted another w/ the same title, had forgotten this one
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Andrea Dietrich
Date: 6/23/2013 12:30:00 AM
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wow, this is the best haiku I have seen all day. FAVE
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Date: 7/13/2020 9:20:00 PM
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Hilarious! Re: second glance (checking the time you posted). Wait another 30 minutes, maybe the hakim will be stirring. As it is, I’m 7 years late.
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Robert Pettit
Date: 6/20/2013 11:52:00 PM
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Nice haiku describing concord grapes waiting to be harvested.
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