Purple Drops

Dark sweet purple drops From clusters of shops I love you that much Now, one by one D R O P D R O P In my waiting mouth With my healthy white teeth Eager to bite! chew you! Squeezing all, the juice in you! by olive_eloi 8:56 pm 3/17/2014 -------------------

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Tim Ryerson

Date: 3/19/2014 12:48:00 PM

At first I thought you were referring to: Well, we won't go there...Now I understand it must be grapes (?) Nontheless, it's cold shower and blood pressure pill time...

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 3/19/2014 3:58:00 PM

hahahha yes a grape.. :D!!! hahahaha :P to God be the greater glory... :)

Paul Callus

Date: 3/19/2014 5:27:00 AM

Wow...to me this is most exotic, erotic and sensual. // paul

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 3/19/2014 4:01:00 PM

hahahhaa... :) erotic and usual huh. :D weeeeee.. what can I say but really thanks to you. To God be the greater glory as always.. :)