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Purest Light

a light shines inside embracing wishes i sail within feelings opening the sails emotions melting each time closing these eyes all i want is you love under this skin crawls a dream you and i in paradise as the moon peeps out from dark clouds floating past unveiling a milky white smile sparkling winks lighting thousands of stars one bright star shines the brightest a distant dream holds out hands to Venus clouds cry weeping in happiness falling emotion sweet beautiful love this world orbits around feelings circling you softly in dreams smiling inwardly washing away darkness light within the nightsky

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Date: 11/13/2013 4:01:00 PM
Under the skin crawls a dream/?you and I in paradise/ Closing these eyes all I want is you love/this world orbits around feelings circling you softly in dreams..These are my favourite lines and there are so many more.Im adding this beauty to my chest of favs.
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Date: 11/13/2013 2:00:00 PM
languid in its trails of expression, as always liam... i am impressed!..:) huggs
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Date: 11/13/2013 1:28:00 PM
Wow...you wrote a new one so quickly....charming. Softly in dreams...smiling inwardly....Smiles all the way on this delightful piece.
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