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Pure Waters Flow

Vast waters covered

in glowing heavenly hue.

Breaking clouds leak love.

*For Raul Moneros' Contest, Champagne Skies*

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  1. Date: 4/7/2010 10:49:00 PM
    Okay Gareth your last round is in. Do not forget to leave a comment.

  1. Date: 3/30/2010 1:41:00 PM
    Congrats James- knew it when I saw this one

  1. Date: 3/30/2010 8:10:00 AM
    Beautiful entry, Gareth. Agape, Moses

  1. Date: 3/29/2010 3:44:00 PM
    congrats on the win!! Good write!

  1. Date: 3/28/2010 11:16:00 PM
    I do know what haikus are you are right. I do not need to take a quiz . To admitt this one is good. Good luck on the contest. Or did you win already . little humor on the winning part. wait a minute . You and a couple of others are good at humor..I posted the poem when I got out of work today . Ready for round three . or quit when you want to.

  1. Date: 3/28/2010 5:48:00 PM
    I am always amazed how each person perceives these photos. Your's is a unique and wonderful inspiration...great job, Gareth! Love, Carrie

  1. Date: 3/28/2010 1:07:00 PM
    Interesting perspective on the picture for readers to enjoy. Congratulations being one of the winners in Raul's contest. Enjoy your honor. Keep on writing! Karen

  1. Date: 3/28/2010 10:22:00 AM
    Beautiful Haiku...congratulations on your win in this contest...Marty

  1. Date: 3/28/2010 8:48:00 AM
    A wonderful Haiku, congratulations on placing in the contest. Caryl

  1. Date: 3/28/2010 8:30:00 AM
    Gareth, many congratulations on your win in Raul's fine contest > kool Haiku >> James

  1. Date: 3/28/2010 6:56:00 AM
    Another big congrats Gareth for your winning poem and placement in the Champagne Skies contest.. an excellent Haiku and vivid description in your lines and a well earned trip to the winners circle..see u there..luv.. "Sweetheart"

  1. Date: 3/28/2010 5:35:00 AM
    Congratulations on your win in Raul's Champagne Skies Contest Gareth. Love Carol

  1. Date: 3/28/2010 1:02:00 AM
    Gareth, congrats on your success in my contest...Raul

  1. Date: 3/26/2010 7:27:00 PM
    All the Haikus I've read for this contest are # 1 in my book Gareth. Including yours. Raul has some tough decisions ahead of him. But he's up to it I'm sure, Smile. Thanks for supporting my blog, I left a comment there for you. Agape, Moses

  1. Date: 3/26/2010 3:13:00 PM
    Wonderful words to a most beautiful picture, good luck in Raul's contest >> James

  1. Date: 3/26/2010 1:16:00 PM
    Thanks for your comments

  1. Date: 3/26/2010 9:54:00 AM
    Very nicely done, Gareth. I Hope this does well in the contest! Hey, can you give me your birthdate so I may know all your numbers. I am doing a follow up numerology blog very soon and would really appreciate it. soup mail me or leave up at my third blog i did on numbers . Luv, Andrea

  1. Date: 3/25/2010 6:03:00 AM
    very nice, must be a winner

  1. Date: 3/25/2010 4:24:00 AM
    very nice Gareth gl in the contest

  1. Date: 3/25/2010 3:43:00 AM
    Great write that should do well in the contest..Keep the creative pen flowing. Thanks for stopping by and commenting on my work..Sara