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Punishment

im punishing myself for all the things i couldn't do im cutting up my veins like ive got something left to prove im crossing every line because im ready for a loss and every second counts because ill die at any cost

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 4/4/2009 8:11:00 AM
Oooh! ...grim images!! Despair and desperation can lead us to consider death. I think it stems fro a lack of self respect and confidence... Neatly rhymed. God bless, Keith
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Date: 3/31/2009 2:50:00 PM
wow this is so good..
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Date: 1/7/2009 11:12:00 AM
wow....this is deep but I really like the way it is written. There is so much behind those words. good work Catia.
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