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Puddle

The puddle this morn Dappled image of the sun Burnt and on the run

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 11/24/2011 12:35:00 PM
You have a nack for Haiku. I like the intersection of the 'burnt' with the 'puddle'. I also enjoyed the rhyme and the overall way the haiku moves from the static puddle image to the closing 'run'. Well done.
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Ross Thompson
Date: 11/26/2011 4:32:00 AM
Thank you very much for your feedback, it is a great encouragement :)

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