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Victim-Of-Ptsd

PTSD As a veteran like those before Many of us have seen war Injuries invisible to the naked eye In our mind we ask ourselves why With all the bad that we have seen We hope this is just a bad dream Our memories won't disappear In itself this gives us fear When we were away we had each other Watching out like sister and brother But now we are home safe at last Hopefully try to forget the past Then night time falls And our minds do wonder Did i make a fatal blunder No no not I it is the thunder The bangs that go of in his head Make him hide in his bed He can not sleep it won't disappear Yes I'm sure he'll shed a tear Back in that place he once had been Reliving the events he had seen The smell the noise back in the mind Shouting screaming feeling blind Feeling lost and on his own Fear, aniexty, depression have grown But being proud and no cry for help Man up son you have your health But the mind will overcome Unless something can be done He does need help a listening ear So he can process all that he does fear He is human his mind is active For his country his life he'd give But alas many didn't make it back Back home to raise the Union Jack So to absent freinds I raise a glass I'm sure this battle is not the last Until we meet at the pearly gates Spread the word about lost mates

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Date: 9/21/2016 4:36:00 PM
This is a very interesting viewpoint for someone from the USA who has known men from Vietnam with PTSD. The mention of the Union Jack threw me. Congratulations.
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Date: 9/21/2016 2:51:00 PM
Congratulations Gordon on the placement of the contest.
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Date: 9/19/2016 3:29:00 PM
Such a touching write Gordon I have a friend who served in Afghanistan - suffers from PTSD its absolutely heartbreaking that he had to leave the job he adored because of his experiences which continue to haunt him still:-( hugs jan xx
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Date: 9/13/2016 10:22:00 PM
Beautiful poem! This touched my heart. Thank you!
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Date: 8/25/2016 4:41:00 PM
An inspiring poem by a British veteran of war. I have been through some of your poems, Gordon, and reference to battle and queen gave me an idea of what is very dear to your memory. Wishing you all the best. // paul
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Date: 8/24/2016 12:58:00 PM
You know this poem is such a nice way to let your partner know how much you think of them well done mate
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Date: 8/24/2016 12:57:00 PM
Fabulous portrayal of life outside the Armed Forces and how it can affect you afterwards - I know you will find your peace it all takes time my friend :)ABU
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Date: 8/24/2016 11:25:00 AM
I can see this happening in this write.... Skat
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