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Proud Third Wheel

See them hand in hand, Together they shine brightly Smiles on both faces So sweet and caring to me, Who could ever wish them apart? Boy asks for gift help, Girl matches my craziness, Perfect for eachother, An adorable couple, Hopes and expectations rise. Gazing gleefully, Into another's bright eyes, Example of love, Now forever together, May your paths stay bound as one.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016




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Date: 4/1/2018 10:37:00 AM
Elissa a beautiful write about true bonding!
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Date: 10/10/2016 7:19:00 PM
They sound pretty right for each other...even at such a tender age.
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Elissa Quigley
Date: 4/6/2017 6:58:00 PM
I agree. Thanks abba
Date: 9/30/2016 9:10:00 PM
A sweet and well-done dedication to your friends! CayCay
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Elissa Quigley
Date: 4/6/2017 6:58:00 PM
thank you CayCay
Date: 9/30/2016 3:51:00 PM
It does make the heart a little lighter to see two people in love. Great write of friendship, Elissa.
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Elissa Quigley
Date: 9/30/2016 3:59:00 PM
Thank you daniel. It is nice to see a relationship in highschool, that is about more than looks, and had boundaries, and mutual respect.
Date: 9/30/2016 1:09:00 PM
A great gift to them Elissa.
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Elissa Quigley
Date: 4/6/2017 6:57:00 PM
thank you tim

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