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Proof Unveiled

(*unveiled*) she said no.... staccato heartbeats tell otherwise (*proof*) never again--- toilet tank hides bottles drowning resolve ---for Chris' contest O_o

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Adell Foster

Date: 9/24/2010 4:41:00 PM

Indeed the proof is in more than the pudding, Congrats on your win in the contest my friend and thank you for your most welcomed comments on my tanka "Sweet Sanctuary" I truly appreciate it :-) God Bless, Always, Adell

Daniel Cwiak

Date: 9/23/2010 2:22:00 AM

Great writes here, Nikko. I think the "proof" is just terrific. Congrats on your win in the contest. Dan C

Harry Horsman

Date: 9/21/2010 6:30:00 AM

excellent. congrats on these winners. Harry

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 9/21/2010 4:22:00 AM

Congratulations Nikko on your win in Chris D. Aechtner's contest "Not Another Senyru Contest!". Love, Carol

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 9/21/2010 12:00:00 AM

Congratulations on your win with these two gems! Great going Nikko!

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 9/20/2010 10:54:00 PM

Two AWESOME ones (of course he has to rank you high with TWO good ones!!) Congratulations. Luv, Andrea

Barbara Gorelick

Date: 9/20/2010 3:04:00 PM

Nice one Nikko..sad, but well written..congrats. BG

Caryl Muzzey

Date: 9/20/2010 2:48:00 PM

A wonderful Senryu, congratulations on a well deserved win. Caryl

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 9/20/2010 2:01:00 PM

Nikko, Congratulations on your win! Love, Carolyn

James Fraser

Date: 9/20/2010 1:35:00 PM

Excellent Nikko, very much deserving of it's winning place in this wonderful contest by Chris >> James :)

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 9/20/2010 1:23:00 PM

Congratulations on this 3rd place in the contest, nikko

Debbie Guzzi

Date: 9/20/2010 12:48:00 PM

unique as always!Congrad's Light & Love

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 9/20/2010 11:50:00 AM

Congrats Nikko on your super win in the Senryu contest.. an awesome victory sweet friend.. enjoy with luv...

Royal Trevino

Date: 9/20/2010 10:56:00 AM

nicee ^.^, from the looks of it this one's a winner :), congrats Nikko, =(^.^)=Royal

Francine Roberts

Date: 9/20/2010 10:23:00 AM

awesome senryu, congrats on your win in the contest Nikko

Gert W. Knop

Date: 9/18/2010 7:06:00 AM

Hey Nikko, parehong iyong Senryus ay malaki! Wow, ikaw wrote maraming poems kamakailan-lamang at ako ay kaya busy sa ibang bagay! And thank you for all your comments!! Ingat!...Gert:)

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 9/16/2010 10:05:00 AM

Enjoyed reading your poetry today Nikko. Hope you have a wonderful day. Love, Carol

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 9/16/2010 12:09:00 AM

wow, these are both SO GREAT,Nikko . I think you are great at senryu. Can you put two like this in his contest??

Carrie Richards

Date: 9/15/2010 3:48:00 PM

A combo of power-house senryus! You have told a story, sad, but true too often! ~Great job! Love, Carrie

Susan Palli

Date: 9/15/2010 1:36:00 PM

Well done! (I sent you soup mail)

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 9/15/2010 1:00:00 PM

Wow Nikko this one is amazing and a terrific entry for the contes by Chris... good luck my sweet friend.. enjoyed your powerful words...staccato heartbeats huh??? luv it..

De R

Date: 9/15/2010 11:04:00 AM

Great entry for Chris's contest,nikko...A lot of people think that drinking away their problems is the solution...but it's not. Good luck in the contest !:) Emilia

Francine Roberts

Date: 9/15/2010 10:44:00 AM

good one, good luck in the contest

Diane Locksley

Date: 9/15/2010 10:34:00 AM

There is no greater sadness than having a lover be a deceiver. Great work, Nikko. Good luck in the contest.

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 9/15/2010 9:48:00 AM

Quite a moving poem, Nikko. Deception can cause people a lot of pain and some do resort to "drowning" their sorrows. Best wishes for success in Chris's contest! Love, Carolyn