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My heart responds to every silent thing The evening star, the chill of winter's sting A world so white serene and still The pink farewell of sun behind the hill When day is done and worries creep And troubles keep my thoughts from sleep Outside there shines a twinkling star In silence spreads it's light afar Reminding me to keep my dreams To trust God's light, through window streams For moon will shine on shadowed sill And birds still sing through wind and chill All nature has this truth to hold Beyond the winter, beyond the cold There lies the dream that brings again The simple beauty of the rain Tomorrow comes on sparrow wings And always brings a promised spring _____________________________________________ I printed this poem, unsigned, folded it around a single rose from my garden and left it under the windshield wiper of a neighbor's car (parked in her driveway). She has been having a hard time, caring for a parent with Alzheimer's.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 6/29/2012 1:20:00 PM
Congrats on your winning work..Sara
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Date: 6/29/2012 1:10:00 PM
Congratulations on your 1st Place win in Cyndi's "Great Soup Release" contest Carrie. Love, Carol
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Date: 6/29/2012 11:16:00 AM
Carrie congrats on your win, an excellent idea yoy had..David
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Date: 6/28/2012 6:34:00 PM
congrats Carri on a grand first place win .. a wonderful write ..
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Date: 6/28/2012 10:00:00 AM
Poetry par excellence! Beautiful words weave their magic right through to the end. Enjoy your win, it was worth every word! Luv, Lizzie
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Date: 5/13/2010 9:12:00 AM
Congrats Carrie on a beautiful write and win in the Couplet of Faith contest by Michael.. wonderful words of inspiration and enjoy another win today..luv.. Linda-Marie..
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Date: 2/27/2010 10:38:00 PM
Carrie, this is simply elegant. I love the feeling it evokes and shall add it to my favorites. Lovely.
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Date: 2/24/2010 8:10:00 AM
This is a very lovely poem. I really enjoyed reading it today...irma
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Date: 2/23/2010 9:12:00 PM
Carrie, I can see this one placing very high in the contest. GREAT job and very visual and lyrical!! LUv, Andrea
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Date: 2/23/2010 5:43:00 AM
This fresh aura you give is through your poetry scents and brightens our air..Charma
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Date: 2/23/2010 3:52:00 AM
Best wishes in the contest Carrie.Rgds Brian & thanks for your comments today
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Date: 2/22/2010 4:46:00 PM
A song of faith and trust in the simple miracles that are all around us, is how I see this lovely poem. good luck Carrie...Margaret
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Date: 2/22/2010 3:14:00 PM
How wonderful it is to see the stars and be reminded to "trust in dreams." If this inspirational poem is for the "My Favorite Things" contest, it should shine like a winning star, Carrie! Love, Carolyn
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