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Promise Me

Before cold winter fills our hearts And autumn leaves float to the ground Promise me I'll be okay Promise me you'll be around. Before the sun sets on the earth And everything is painted black Promise me you'll always care Promise me you love me back. Before God calls our souls to part And natures life comes to an end Promise me you'll still be here Promise me you'll be my friend.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 2/10/2012 10:24:00 PM
Verse upon verse like arrows to the heart.
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Date: 7/4/2011 2:34:00 PM
Wow, rhythmic and charming I can say! It is wonderful!
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Date: 5/20/2011 1:32:00 PM
You are so in tune with life and the elements when blending your words and feelings into poetry! Amazing write!
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Date: 5/1/2011 7:00:00 PM
i love this poem thanks for the wonderful read but right now my state of mind is on shaky grounds when it comes to love i almost believe that it only exists in the heavens. 7up!!!
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Date: 5/1/2011 8:57:00 AM
I enjoyed this passionate write, Dana
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Date: 4/30/2011 6:42:00 AM
A passionate write dear poet ! I love the writes filled with longing ! Have a wonderful weekend Dana'lynn...much love, james
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Date: 4/27/2011 8:48:00 AM
I promise!!! lol This is a very cool write...Jimmy
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Date: 4/26/2011 6:33:00 AM
I think you were looking for some hope as you wrote this poem. A nice poem written with heart. Emilia:)
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