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Promiscuous Passions Pretense

Promiscuous passions pretense Promiscuous passion puts on a pretense as he pridefully tries to prove his physical prowess Promiscuous passion presumptuously pursues prey by projecting his powerful persona on the perfect person Promiscuous passions asks would you dance with me please as he pours profusely personal admiration along with the drink Promiscuous passion persistently says you are so beautiful but it's only a pretense to persuade her to provide permission Promiscuous passion promises perpetual devotion proclaiming permanence of passion as a possibility (but remember the pretense) Promiscuous passions pretense provides positive proof so she falls for it promptly providing privacy... so predictable. Promiscuous passions pretense plan works perfectly mission complete so... promiscuous passion promptly puts on his pants and parts ways permanently Leaving the pitiful prey to ponder what happened and how to proceed with this perfectly predictable predicament. John Derek Hamilton April 09,2016

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Date: 4/11/2016 7:53:00 AM
A tale as old as time told in a fresh way.
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John Hamilton
Date: 6/24/2016 1:36:00 PM
Sorry Richard missed this one somehow, thanks for the visit!
Date: 4/10/2016 1:14:00 PM
Impressed with this poem on "P" ... all of the other 25 letters watch out ... lest John writes a poem on ya ;) A fun write here, intelligently written, with a message behind it all. Lots of gals falling for the same trap ... lots of guys lacking some class.
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John Hamilton
Date: 6/24/2016 1:35:00 PM
Sorry I missed this somehow, thanks Timothy, hope all is well!
Date: 4/10/2016 6:19:00 AM
Pefectly penned psychoanalytic peepshow!
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John Hamilton
Date: 4/10/2016 7:32:00 AM
Thanks Tom
Date: 4/10/2016 2:34:00 AM
The perpetrators should be permanently put in prison!:-) hugs Jan xx
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John Hamilton
Date: 4/10/2016 7:31:00 AM
That's a good one! Thanks Jan
Date: 4/10/2016 1:00:00 AM
Perfectly Put!!!
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John Hamilton
Date: 4/10/2016 7:30:00 AM
thanks Brian
Date: 4/9/2016 11:11:00 PM
Aha! The old "P" word ploy eh? Works every time. Good job John, very good read. Thanks, Charlie
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John Hamilton
Date: 4/10/2016 7:29:00 AM
Thanks Charlie
Date: 4/9/2016 10:00:00 PM
A most enjoyable read. Thanks John.
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John Hamilton
Date: 4/10/2016 7:29:00 AM
Thanks Lenny

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