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The Promenade. 

Another day Sunday at the seaside resort luckily there were 
no carousels, few kids and those who were there behaved 
textbook like, with their grandparents loyally eating ice cream 
and drinking soda pops; since they were given everything they 
wanted, there were few tantrums. 

The latest trend now (for women) is to wear long, lose fitting 
flowering dresses and my wife said she still had dresses like that 
going  back forty years; she will wear one of them tomorrow. 
Grand yachts at the marina I counted three “Aston Martins” 
wondered if Prince Charles was around. Yet on the promenade 
I saw mostly pensioners who had been saving for a year to have 
this one vacation. I was the only one who murmured darkly if 
the rich had paid their taxes; but what do you expect of a man 
who wants to bring back the guillotine. 

Time has mellowed me the weather was summery I wore blazer 
and looked posh (that´s what she said) and I did my best to keep 
my stomach in. This is an enchanting time we tried not to think 
of tomorrows as we sat on a bench eating ice-cream yogurt
…it has less sugar.    

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  1. Date: 9/24/2012 7:47:00 AM
    Dear Jan - Perfect picture. What a lovely couple on the timeless promenade if only a bit grumpy. love, Kathy

    hansen Avatar jan oskar hansen
    Date: 9/24/2012 9:03:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    not really grumpy only my old self
  1. Date: 9/24/2012 7:22:00 AM
    Great...I enjoyed your day and the low calorie yogurt. BG

    hansen Avatar jan oskar hansen
    Date: 9/24/2012 9:03:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    thank you Barbara