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A butterfly caught In a summer's hat Released to freedom His progeny flies A butterfly caught In a scientist's net Penned, genus named Now extinct species This is a Naani Poem but suppose to be only one stanza..

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Barry Stebbings

Date: 12/11/2016 2:59:00 PM

Very clever, Sara. +7 // Barry

Sara Kendrick
Date: 12/11/2016 7:59:00 PM

Barry, Your presence at my work is uplifting..I appreciate the rating..Have a blessed week..Sara

Ravi Sathasivam

Date: 12/11/2016 2:06:00 AM

Excellent. Lovely poem. Enjoyed reading it. Thanks for sharing it.

Sara Kendrick
Date: 12/11/2016 8:00:00 PM

Ravi, It is nice to have a place to share my imaginings in a friendly place where it is safe to post..Thanks for you reading my work..Sara

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 12/9/2016 4:29:00 AM

- A wonderful poem, Sara - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Sara Kendrick
Date: 12/9/2016 4:05:00 PM

Anne, I am delighted that you found my work wonderful..Sara

Paloma P

Date: 12/8/2016 3:53:00 PM

Very astute perception Sara, second verse is sadly affecting.

Sara Kendrick
Date: 12/9/2016 4:04:00 PM

Paloma, Thanks for your visit to my page..Your presence is very uplifting..Sara