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Profound Elation

Incinerate me with your fierce ardor Dissolve your very being into me We converge and detonate Into a state of bliss Your osculations are exceptionally pleasurable As i liquify and flow into your veins To forever be in your heart literally Intaking your ambiance straight to my brain Seeping into your arms like molten wax Endeavoring to extract your very essence Longing uncontrollably for your contact Your hands not only touches my skin Your hands caresses my heart and soul Sending me spiraling into penetrating delight That overcomes my senses and renders me Susceptible to your every impulse Which always leaves my form Vibrating ferociously Purrrrr

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Date: 8/8/2013 7:39:00 PM
Whoa, intense poem you wrote here! Very good imagery, quite vibrant in your description of hmmm either love or lust...couldn't decide -very nice though! MC
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April Mitchell
Date: 8/8/2013 7:51:00 PM
Thank you it's like everything between passion and love and lust and romance!just a bunch of mixtures threw in there!lol
Date: 8/7/2013 9:02:00 AM
Early love infatuates the senses and overwhelms the psyche. It is a heavy drug well defined by your poem.
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April Mitchell
Date: 8/7/2013 6:45:00 PM
oh yes it is!hahaha!glad you got it!

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