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Probabilities

Probabilities Longing for your love, Probably I might be blessed, If not one sided ! Sitting in a group, Yet loneliness grips my mind, Probably elsewhere ! You hear my heartbeats, Reciprocate hugging heats, Probably dreaming ! Written on 21/7/14 Contest - haiku on probabilities Sponsor- Marvin celestial Ranked 4th

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Scott Thirtyseven
Date: 8/11/2014 9:30:00 AM
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Probably may things, but a winner definitely, congrats. Great write.
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Sam Raj
Date: 8/9/2014 11:21:00 AM
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Hi Dr. Upmaji, Congrats on this big win. A wonderful poem of probabilities. Thanks for sharing. TC :-)
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Pandita Sietesantos
Date: 8/9/2014 9:26:00 AM
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Congratulations dear Dr. Upma, on your great win. I enjoyed reading this wonderful haiku. Great write! Pandita
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Dr Anuradha Moogi
Date: 8/8/2014 10:22:00 PM
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Really romantic!!!!!
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Dr.Ram Mehta
Date: 8/8/2014 9:48:00 PM
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Lovely romantic expressions, Dr. Upma. congrats on the win
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Casarah Nance
Date: 8/8/2014 9:01:00 PM
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Wonderful winning Haiku's my friend :) Hugs :)
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D.W. Rodgers
Date: 8/8/2014 7:39:00 PM
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Well done, touching many sides. Congrats on your win.
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 8/8/2014 7:35:00 PM
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One of my favorites, congratulations.
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Andrea Dietrich
Date: 8/8/2014 6:56:00 PM
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Nice ones, Dr. Upma. Congrats for your win.
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Abdul Malik
Date: 8/8/2014 6:38:00 PM
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Hey good job! "Probably dreaming!"
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Jan Allison
Date: 8/8/2014 6:29:00 PM
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three excellent haiku i especially like the second one - great win! Hugs Jan xxx
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Paul Callus
Date: 8/8/2014 2:14:00 PM
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Well done, Upma! I had no doubt about the final result. Big congratulations. // paul
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Verlena S. Walker
Date: 7/23/2014 1:26:00 AM
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Awesome write Upma... GL in the contest... Hugs Verlena
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Andrea Dietrich
Date: 7/21/2014 5:06:00 PM
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a trio of interesting poems on probabilities. good luck in the contest!
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Dr. Upma A. Sharma
Date: 7/22/2014 4:53:00 AM
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Thnx Andrea my dear friend!
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Paul Callus
Date: 7/21/2014 4:50:00 PM
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Probably these haiku are among the best I've read so far. All three final lines are excellent. gl in contest, Upma! // paul
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Dr. Upma A. Sharma
Date: 7/22/2014 4:55:00 AM
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Glad to have ur very kind encouraging comments as ever Paul ! Thnx a lot !

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