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Prime Rises

The engorged sky billows, a monochromatic delight of soft tones ... a lullaby of tissue paper edges fragile as a primrose. The bashful sun blushes sending pastel light through notes of grey to white soft, velveteen. harmonies overlap shadow less, spiritual. Ah, the sweet octaves of visual light defrayed by motes of earthly ash upon the sky bring such joy to mankind fragile as a primrose.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 2/11/2012 4:34:00 PM
This was beautiful poem, I really enjoyed to read it, its is always a pleasure to read your poems! oxoxo love Laila
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Date: 2/11/2012 11:25:00 AM
very nice imagery .Love the metaphoric use of Primerose.
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