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Pretty People

I envy those with elongated Pretty threads Running along the supple beds And a tone heavenly created A mesmerizing scent Caught from far An unfamiliar star Scarring those for rent Shame how those eye-catching Are mirroring the TNT to us exploded And they watch as we eroded Those that are naturally enchanting

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Jay Loveless

Date: 6/8/2009 10:15:00 AM

So Pretty. Im Sure Your One Of Those 'Naturaly Enchanting" People Too. You Just Dont Realize It. And Remember. Who You ARE. Counts Too. If Your Beautiful On The Outside And Ugly On The Inside (Like My Sister) Then Your Worth Nothing. If Your Beautiful On The Inside (Even If Your Not On The Out Side) Then Your Worth More Then Gold. Always Remember That. Peace And Love. Boo Boo

Patricia Langston-Moran

Date: 6/4/2009 10:15:00 AM

Again, I am amazed at your images...and your wonderful words which are entwined in this poetry with such beauty and delicate loveliness. Congrats..!!! You are a fine poet. Patricia

Brandy Megens

Date: 5/23/2009 10:04:00 AM

D E E P my brother VERY DEEP