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Pretty Me

Staring in the mirror I see a something I believe I see cold dark fear I see a pretty me There’s a shadow of hope With lines of darkness With eyes that can see A lost soul inside me I’m covered in dust From hiding for so long Shine the fresh light To where I belong Looking in the mirror It’s sometimes hard to see But far in the distance I can see a pretty me

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Ginger Marie

Date: 11/3/2009 5:45:00 AM

Set it free :]

Gareth Heslop

Date: 8/7/2009 3:34:00 PM

hard to get the soul to reveal itself and then believe in what you see...grrrth

Jod!E Quintero

Date: 8/2/2009 9:47:00 AM

Thank you all. smiles.

James Fraser

Date: 8/1/2009 1:23:00 PM

Jessica summed this write totally, Jodie you have talent girl, encourage it, as i look forward to reading your future writes>>James

Cecil Hickman

Date: 8/1/2009 8:37:00 AM

a very well wriiten piece that flows so easy and delivers the feelings that you have and as well others can relate too,we have all seen what you have described,,,blessings..Cecil Thank you for reading and commenting on my poems.

Jessica Arteaga

Date: 8/1/2009 7:10:00 AM

we need to uncover ourselves to see ourselves, very good