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Pretty Love

. Lil’ flutter ‘bout mine dome tickling the thoughts which cause the sensitive and leave this heart you know gasping twisting twirling likewise amazed at the jovial burst of instant and satisfying blurts enveloped with pretty love

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Elizabeth Wesley

Date: 9/28/2011 11:21:00 PM

Pretty erotic is that pretty love James, you know a lot about the subject and keep the reader fascinated with your description.

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 7/30/2011 9:37:00 PM

am solo at the beach with my puppy ..so "fireworks" will have to wait a bit till Ron gets home and me too..luv...but I read him the words over the phone but he is not a poetry enthusiast..oh...want to share my wine???

Kabuteng P.Ink K.

Date: 7/13/2011 10:49:00 AM

This sure is one wonderful read, James, seems like this was one pretty rollercoaster love as well :) I love rollercoaster rides ;)

Phyllis Babcock

Date: 7/13/2011 8:49:00 AM

Love this poem on love along with the words, gasping, twisting, twirling which leaves love pretty much on the high note. Hope you and Noah are having a lovely summer. love phyl

Daver Austin

Date: 7/11/2011 1:39:00 PM

Green tea, Sir James? GREEN TEA!!!! You must be weird. I am weird too so don't be offended. I've noticed that green tea drinkers usually have those "gasping, twisting, twirling" episodes. Green tea drinkers of America, UNITE! Love, daver

James Foulk

Date: 7/11/2011 12:11:00 PM

a beautiful and creative write.

Wilma Neels

Date: 7/11/2011 6:54:00 AM

A beautiful way to describe "pretty love" this has such a feathery touch to it :) you made me smile today.. lfde Wilma

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 7/10/2011 3:08:00 PM

Dear James, I could see this woman as a beautiful butterfly who entered your life. What a delight to read. Awesome meter and great emotion make this a superb write, my friend. Love to you and Noah, Carolyn

Debbie Guzzi

Date: 7/10/2011 2:56:00 PM

gotta love those blurts, part of the "let 'er rip" school of poetry James Goff uses! Light & Love [hugs to Noah!]

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 7/10/2011 1:16:00 AM

You should be named the Sensuous poet, James! I think you are in love with love! thanks for your sweet remarks today!andrea

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 7/9/2011 4:47:00 PM

oh that pretty luv sounds just beautiful James as u intertwine your lines so perfectly ..gasping.. tickling...twisting..twirling.. I experience this phenom daily .. highly recommend..haha.. awesome as u luv..

Barbara Gorelick

Date: 7/9/2011 3:16:00 PM

a pretty write about pretty love...very nice. BG

Sara Kendrick

Date: 7/9/2011 12:57:00 PM

I especially like the third line..Yes, I have read someone's work and there were tickling thoughts..Sara

Anula Aboobacker

Date: 7/9/2011 11:38:00 AM

i feel loved,... good work