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Pretension

PRETENSION Her indifference was merely a facade. Her eyes glisten in passion but denies in pretension. I am watching as critic since a decade. Our unison is sure if I persuade. I adore and carry my tingling feeling I know she loves best, but shows disinterest It is high time to honor her own yearning. Hers and mine should combine in our stepping. Not to try to act tact showing damn denial No need to be rough rude She has crossed her childhood. No need to be strict on baseless refusal. Eager to see her in milk white dress; “Bridal”! 08/06/15

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Date: 12/7/2019 12:33:00 AM
Eager to see her in milk white dress; “Bridal”! ... Wow... I always feel, limericks is a very versatile form of poetry. To confine it to slap-stick kind of ditties, I think, is wasting its potential.
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Anisha Dutta
Date: 12/7/2019 1:03:00 AM
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Date: 9/9/2016 9:36:00 AM
Beautiful poem read from you my friend. Hugs, Cloudy poet, bl
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Anisha Dutta
Date: 12/7/2019 1:04:00 AM
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