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Pressure To Succeed

Do the deed, Just succeed, Do it yourself, In your own wealth, I want to be better, In lighter weather, Airy was the day, You took my pride away, None left to find, Just tapes to rewind, Cultivate the mind, Achieve, Succeed, Please just breathe, Life is easy, When you’re breezy, Feel the pain I’ve felt, Through the years, With lack of wealth, Busted baby, Well maybe, Never top notch, On your watch, I’m always amazed, By how you’re crazed, I’m on the ground, Never to be found, Push harder, Nearly murder, I feel drained, Deathly pained, Improve my mood, You’re just plain rude, Wait for the day, When I go away, I’m sure you’ll smile, At least for a while, Putting up, I’ll put you down, Hear the sound? Come around? I’ll teach you truth, I’ll show you youth, Civilly, Liberally, You see I’ll be, What you never were.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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