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Pressing Lips

I love taking in your delicious ideas rolling red carpet on my tongue your exquisite taste lingers in my mind caramel kisses tracing the paths of my soul pecking soft delicate notes on a tapestry of love drawing lines linking spices refining our rhythms uniting as one ...... dressed in red silk I await your answer ...

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Date: 5/23/2016 5:17:00 PM
Hello Angeline!! A very deliciously articulated free verse write. I see that my two close friends and colleagues, Liam McDaid and Anne-Lise Andresen, managed to read your fine poem here. I like it too!! Well-Done and A "7." Cheers and Best, Gary
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Angeline Haikutwinkle
Date: 5/24/2016 12:38:00 AM
Much Appreciated, Mr. Bateman
Date: 3/2/2016 4:46:00 AM
Very beautifully painted picture rolling red carpet of my tongue excellent imaginary wishing you a blessed week
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Angeline Haikutwinkle
Date: 3/2/2016 7:49:00 PM
Much appreciated Liam ;)
Date: 3/1/2016 3:38:00 AM
- Angeline, a lovely poem :) - Caramel hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Angeline Haikutwinkle
Date: 3/2/2016 7:50:00 PM
Thank you for reading and commenting ;)

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