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Presence Of Fall

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Presence Of Fall

Red Holly berries decorate
the Holly shrub; contrast
waxy deep green leaves, buds pop 'pon
the Tulip Tree amassed.

The Camellia Sasanqua's white
blossoms show just below
the last few golden pears of gold_
Better work than Van Gogh 

Possibly unfinished__

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  1. Date: 11/15/2012 3:02:00 PM
    Lots of color in this sweet poem of fall. Loved the last line.

  1. Date: 11/15/2012 11:08:00 AM
    This is such a brilliant write, maybe unfinished true, but still done very eloquently! I really enjoyed reading this delightful and perfected poem this afternoon! What a special and wondrous piece, Great Work!!

  1. Date: 11/15/2012 8:51:00 AM
    Good write :)

  1. Date: 11/15/2012 8:38:00 AM
    Love the natural melange that you have artfully sculpted. You have glossed the holiday with a gilded veil.