Premonition

Fog lifts from headstone Reveals your name, birth and death Time nears mend your ways

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Gary Bateman

Date: 6/2/2015 2:10:00 PM

Hello Judy, Your Senryu here does send a very clear message. We all only have so much time allotted to each of us in our "mortal coil." Enjoyed it!! Best Wishes, Gary

Daver Austin

Date: 5/7/2015 9:22:00 AM

At 85 I should heed your warning. Good stuff. Congrats on the selection. daver

Jan Allison

Date: 5/4/2015 5:08:00 AM

great to see this featured on the home page Judy xxx hugs jan xx

Skat A

Date: 5/3/2015 8:54:00 PM

Judy, Congratulations on having your poem featured this week. SKAT love

Judy Konos
Date: 5/3/2015 9:24:00 PM

Thank you Skat......Love that name....S K A T

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 4/18/2015 2:25:00 PM

Judy, Congratulations in John's "Let 'er Rip - Shoot from the Hip" contest!!! Luv LINDA

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 4/9/2015 11:47:00 PM

oooh, what a premonition!! Congrats for your big win!

Jan Allison

Date: 4/7/2015 6:10:00 PM

so few words say so much Judy - sure grabbed my attention - congrats on your win:-) Hugs Jan xx

Viv Wigley

Date: 4/7/2015 7:24:00 AM

Concise, even.

Viv Wigley

Date: 4/7/2015 7:23:00 AM

Sharp, concies, neat. Worthy verse. WELL DONE! VIV X

John Lawless

Date: 4/7/2015 6:32:00 AM

Judy, this little beauty hit like a short left hook - quick, solid, and attention grabbing. Thanks for participating in the contest.

Judy Konos
Date: 4/7/2015 7:57:00 AM

Oh to be a poet like the great John Lawless.

Kp Nunez

Date: 3/22/2015 12:33:00 AM

A fine warning, dear Judy. An exceptional haiku if I may say so. Thank you for sharing this today, Sunday. Kim:)