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Below is the poem entitled PREDETOR which was written by poet J.KOLADI SAMSON. Please feel free to comment on this poem. However, please remember, PoetrySoup is a place of encouragement and growth.



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High above clouds
You flew
Radar focusing beneath
In search of prey.

Image fell on screen
One walking in  haste
His head bowed down
Wondering at
Mismatching arithmetic
At home, office
Breaking his back
To meet ends both
Nebulous mind.

Flare in your eyes
Like a diving bird
Impertinent crash landing
Sharp claws clung
An ascension with prey
Into unreachable heights
Vanishing into thin blue.

A quill is shed
Life drops dead.

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  1. Date: 8/22/2012 9:50:00 AM
    Congratulations on your very well deserved poetry being featured this week J. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 6/6/2012 5:23:00 AM
    This is explicitly awesome. I love the piece so much and I think I will be checking on your other wonderful works... Its a blessing coming to your page and I hope you do well to stop by too. Once again, nice work.

    Date: 6/18/2012 2:22:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you for your evaluation. I shall go through your poems. I am pasting one more poem. Hope you will go through it. Please try to analyse it.
  1. Date: 6/5/2012 6:55:00 PM
    I wrote one by the same title Koladi....nicely done..Joseph

  1. Date: 6/5/2012 11:54:00 AM
    A warm welcome to PoetrySoup I offer to you J. I wish for you the best in your writing endeavors whatever they may be. May you find inspiration by reading some of the poetry written here by other poets. May the sun shine on you that you might find great joy in your life. Love, Carol

    Date: 6/18/2012 2:23:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you for nice words. I need your wishes and blessings for the Sun to shine on me. Samson