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Predator

Look deep into the eyes of the predator. Look into the anger, the hate and the fear backed by the ever wanting urge to kill. Look into the eyes of the predator. The eyes that rip through flesh; that tare through purity and righteousness; that pierce the white dainty exterior of the prey. Look into the eyes of the predator. Look deep and see a child, one so innocent and unknowing. See the pain and the anguish, the fears and the flesh mutilating wounds. Look into the eyes of the predator. See the exact moment when time became too much to bear, when one more breath became a choice between life and death. Look into the eyes of the predator. What is it that you see but the embodiment of the prey.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013




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Date: 4/23/2013 10:33:00 PM
Kellie, Wishing you a nice warm welcome to the Poetry Soup. I hope you find this community to be one of the best. May you find inspiration by reading some of the poetry written here by other poets, and myself! If you ever want or need feedback on any given poem, please feel free and look me up by clicking on my name anytime you see it. HUGS <3 from your newest friend ~*~SKAT"
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Date: 4/22/2013 5:06:00 AM
Thank you for your well written poem Kellie. - Welcome to P-Soup! - Have fun with writing, reading and comments with us. - Good luck! - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 4/21/2013 10:00:00 PM
Extremely intense! A tremendous job.
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Date: 4/21/2013 9:24:00 PM
A deep poem about the what creeps me out. like a bear they are, Kellie , "Welcome to the poetry soup. My name is Linda; many poets on the soup call me PD for fun. I'm stopping by to invite you on over to my latest contest --called the “7 wonders” I'm hoping you will consider the enjoyment and challenges we offer in our contest. If you like, please consider my contest. You can find the contest page on the top left hand side. I’m looking forward in reading and enjoying your poems in the future. Today I will start by reading all you have posted this far..... Thanks @-> LINDA <-@"
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