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Practiced Passion

First came a moon Then it was the second Words called me night and noon Pink pearls of passion First it tasted blue Then as birds joined the moon Your love in view Oranges in dune Shadow in the tea Your chiselled poems Crazily desiring me Your lovely haemoglobins I gaze at the crane Flying in the blue Lovely coloured rain Angelina in queue They come and hold my hand Lead me to the colour Both bright and bland I cannot but love her These moon gathering sessions Of the practiced passion These smelling obsessions Of your rhododendrons Are my moons in your smile Of the poetry on your lip Like the river Nile A twilight in my ship _____________________________________ 14/11/2016 Contest: Practiced Passion Sponsor: Frank Herrera

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Date: 11/19/2016 12:55:00 PM
Really a treat of color, passion, smell, taste and feel. Such a vivid and beautiful expression of the wonder of love.
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Probir Gupta
Date: 11/19/2016 7:51:00 PM
Thank you so much ...
Date: 11/19/2016 12:13:00 PM
Master of love poems are you, Probir. Great imagery of the moon. Blessings, Janis.
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Probir Gupta
Date: 11/19/2016 7:51:00 PM
Thank you, Janis ...
Date: 11/15/2016 7:21:00 AM
Great. I like the moon theme. It seems to guide me as well. Many wishes, Kai
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Probir Gupta
Date: 11/19/2016 7:52:00 PM
Thank you for reading my poem and the precious comment ...
Date: 11/14/2016 11:16:00 AM
what a mystical passion well told, probir... very tantalizing..huggs
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Probir Gupta
Date: 11/14/2016 8:07:00 PM
If you have really liked it, it has certainly obtained pass marks! ... Thank you ...
Date: 11/14/2016 5:41:00 AM
Epitome of euphoric romanticism my friend, Probir! Keep it up! Excellent!
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Probir Gupta
Date: 11/14/2016 5:47:00 AM
Yes, of the poet, not necessarily mine ... thank you ...

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