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Poverty line

Society’s scars
alas dig deep with despair....
straight line to welfare

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  1. Date: 9/8/2012 1:20:00 AM
    Seeing this one again. It says so much about these days!!

  1. Date: 9/28/2010 3:10:00 AM
    enjoyed your poem,..p.d.

  1. Date: 9/24/2010 9:21:00 PM
    congrats on your HM, Harry, it was a really good one.

  1. Date: 9/24/2010 7:04:00 AM
    Congratulations on your win Harry in Paula Swanson's contest "Line". Love, Carol

  1. Date: 9/24/2010 4:43:00 AM
    I thought this was one of the best, Harry. Congrats on your success in the contest. Love, Carolyn

  1. Date: 9/23/2010 9:35:00 PM
    congrats on your HM in the contest with this great senryu

  1. Date: 9/23/2010 6:07:00 PM
    Congrats Harry on your HM in the Line contest... awesome words my friend... deep and intense... enjoy your wonderful win with luv..

  1. Date: 9/23/2010 4:08:00 PM
    Congratulations on this well deserved win, harry

  1. Date: 9/23/2010 5:06:00 AM
    That is really great stuff, Harry! And good alliteration in this Senryu! Well done!...Gert

  1. Date: 9/22/2010 10:12:00 PM
    WOW, I think you did a great job with this one, Harry. I am seeing great entries tonight. Mine is kind of an oldie I changed for the contest. I was angry at the time (but now they have really cleaned up their act and the lines are much faster there!) LUv, Andrea

  1. Date: 9/22/2010 9:50:00 PM
    Holy cow! Look at this beauty! Excellent dig-deep-despair alliteration. Perfect! It will be among the winners. Meanwhile, it goes to my FAVs! Great senryu, Harry! Ruben.

  1. Date: 9/22/2010 5:02:00 PM
    and getting shorter for my family.

  1. Date: 9/22/2010 9:31:00 AM
    great senryu Harry

  1. Date: 9/22/2010 6:18:00 AM
    Brilliant senryu Harry, good luck if this is for the Line contest ;) Wilma

  1. Date: 9/22/2010 6:05:00 AM
    It does not take long to fall into poverty these days, Harry. Brilliant senryu that conveys a strong message with just a few words. I think this will do very well in the contest! Love, Carolyn

  1. Date: 9/22/2010 5:25:00 AM
    Perfect Sneryu with nice images, nice approach to the theme of line

  1. Date: 9/22/2010 4:48:00 AM
    So much said in so few words, very well put

  1. Date: 9/22/2010 3:13:00 AM
    Great idea for the line contest...Reads like a true winners' circle work...I am glad that I chose this one to read today..Thanks for your kind and encouraging remarks on my work..Sara

  1. Date: 9/22/2010 2:57:00 AM
    A short quick walk these days, excellent Senryu.